Carlene Nottage
Friday, December 16, 2011
Snowy Pastimes! Poem! What do you think? Thank you!?
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Very lovely. Suggestion: S1L2 - perhaps say "small boy" - the word "little" is being overused. Or change "little by little" to something like inch by inch? S2L3 - the word "when" is not needed. ♥
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